Some people believe that a greater difference in age between parents and children is more beneficial than less of a difference.
Do you think the advantages of a greater age difference outweigh the disadvantage?
In current generations, it is much common that people have children at an older age than in the past. In the past, most young generation became parents in their 20s where these days people planning to have children in their mid-30’s or early 40’s. This age gap has a significant impact on both children and parents. In my opinion the advantages of a greater age gap are more and valuable. But we cannot overshadow the disadvantages. In the following paragraphs would elucidate the merits and demerits of this development.
A positive aspect of having a larger age gap is financial stability and more time. To explain this, persons established their career and businesses in their early 30’s, they earn thousands of dollars and pre-occupy luxuries such as toys, home, car, and many more before having kid. Furthermore, they can spend extra 4 to 5 hours a day with their offspring. For example, my uncle and aunt had a child in their early 30’s.
My uncle and my cousin Gautam spend a lot of time playing different games in their luxurious farmhouse. Clearly, it benefits a lot of children.
Negative aspects of this trend are older parents feel ran out of energy and less empathy than their fellow young parents. To explain this, as people age increases, they require more sleep and get easily tired because they have less active energy. In addition to this, older parents have less understanding of modern culture and technologies. For instance, my uncle can not play cricket more than half an hour with his child Gautam because he feels exhausted. He always arguing with Gautam for using tablets and mobile phone.
In conclusion, the benefits of a greater age gap of parents have more time and more money. However, the drawbacks of this trend is less energy and less understating. People should have children when they are ready.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 470, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...m because he feels exhausted. He always arguing with Gautam for using tablets and mobil...
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Line 8, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ould have children when they are ready.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93290734824 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61544481935 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543130990415 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.366930567 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.65 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218620188698 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698329209788 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653078938225 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13040628648 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661703564823 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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