Some people believe that the higher a product is priced, the most likely it is that people will want to buy it. To what extent does price influence potential buyers? What other factors influence people to buy a product?
As a buyer, it is common for them to consider some aspects as to convince them about the targeted-products. There are two main factors that people will take into account before they purchase something.
An overpriced item represents the best quality of products. This is because the products are made by the highest materials causing the production more expensive, but it also brings more confidence for those purchased it. For example, iPhone is a well-known and the most expensive gadget brand in this era, so if people purchased an iPhone and become a user after it. They will have high-tech features compared to other gadget users, and this makes their look luxurious. Although the price equals with its quality, many people still have misconception about the reason behind the price of why such products are soaring.
Despite the aforementioned factor that become buyers consideration, they are also influenced by the advertisement, leading to a tendency of purchasing products based on the information that they obtained from the media. Definitely, this helps them to review the products that they want to buy before continuing the payment method, and customers can leave their testimony about their impression of such items after they received it. For instance, Shopee, the most popular e-commerce in Indonesia because this platform’s display are user-friendly, and its often to be advertised by celebrities through social media. Shopee offers a ton of product categories which their customers able to review products from previous buyers testimonies or even from the endorsed actresses.
In conclusion, people tend to buy something because it is expensive which it suggests has a better quality, and advertisement also attract buyers’ desire.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4347826087 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99655862267 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0769284277 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257916366599 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862231774099 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458092697476 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146455443565 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207695234419 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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