Some people believe that individuals are responsible for their own personal happiness. Others argue that happiness can be affected by other factors.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that the pursuit of happiness is one of humankind's greatest motivations. While the personal and internal happiness is more difficult to describe, many psychologists debate that there are other external factors which give people the opportunities to experience or achieve happiness. Both of these views will be discussed in this essay.
On the one hand, individuals are responsible for their own happiness since nobody can make happiness for them. Humans ought to make more efforts to obtain all goals for themselves which is a golden rule of life. What is more is that each individual only lives once in this world. Therefore, instead of wasting their time fooling around or being lazy, they should live with their full passion along with taking joy and pleasure from life.
On the other hand, some citizens argue that the happiness of people relates to their relationship, social status, wealth and career success. If someone has enough money in his pocket, he will have the chance to enjoy a luxurious life with family and obviously happiness as well. Moving to another point, humans spend one part of their day dealing with their work. That is the reason why every worker should do their own, favourite job. It is not only less stressful and tiring but you also can take joy and satisfaction while working.
To sum up, happiness is difficult to define because it is particularly different to each individual, but I wholeheartedly believe that our basic needs for shelter, food and job need to be fulfilled before we can experience it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: humankinds the greatest
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Suggestion:
...hile the personal and internal happiness is more difficult to describe, many psyc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, no doubt, to sum up, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95801526718 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63536006304 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645038167939 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.291947763 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9230769231 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381210115814 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111742147886 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925215091487 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19991164425 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569605465443 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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