Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
At the present, people have different types of problems, some are related to social or other is financial. However, some people deem that to solve the issue in a better way. In my point of view, everyone has learned something from the situation, so in future, it will be helping. Like person learn from their mistakes.
On the one hand, human beings have their own need and all are believed in stratified work. Somehow, it was not fulfilled which they want by the work centre. Another main living source is money, now a day, money is like everything. Sometimes people have not any way without accepting it. What happened in India the education ratio has more than the uneducated public ratio, that why have limited job opportunities. it is the main cause, why people has accepted all circumstances
On other hand, take some argument from other people. they believe that, first of all, we try to improve over problems, as one person have extra money, that time they do help others who need it. When you uphold each other that time you solve the 90℅ troubles of your life, it's the best way to avoid the situation because everyone has kind of problems better life will in the good living, not in the disaster world. In that world, you don't have time for yourself and your family members.
Overall, in every situation all human beings have to live happily and accept the bad time of your life. And try to come out smoothly. I think that people have to expand some issues help of their life experiences..
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...earned something from the situation, so in future, it will be helping. Like person learn ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 414, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...hat why have limited job opportunities. it is the main cause, why people has accep...
^^
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
..., take some argument from other people. they believe that, first of all, we try to i...
^^^^
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ou solve the 90℅ troubles of your life, its the best way to avoid the situation bec...
^^^
Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... the disaster world. In that world, you dont have time for yourself and your family ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 212, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...me issues help of their life experiences..
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, i think, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63670411985 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29905200916 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59925093633 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6073144226 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.375 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21593420152 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650259613874 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049245832674 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12740389747 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274590942133 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...earned something from the situation, so in future, it will be helping. Like person learn ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 414, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...hat why have limited job opportunities. it is the main cause, why people has accep...
^^
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
..., take some argument from other people. they believe that, first of all, we try to i...
^^^^
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ou solve the 90℅ troubles of your life, its the best way to avoid the situation bec...
^^^
Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... the disaster world. In that world, you dont have time for yourself and your family ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 212, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...me issues help of their life experiences..
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, i think, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63670411985 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29905200916 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59925093633 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6073144226 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.375 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21593420152 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650259613874 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049245832674 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12740389747 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274590942133 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.