Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this day and age, along with the rapid development of technology, humans have to work harder and harder in order to keep pace with the growing changes of the world. Some people perceive accepting bad situations is a good choice whilst I am an advocate with the idea persuading people to be hard-working to get better day by day.
Turning to the first view, the first and foremost reason for agreeing to live in bad conditions such as lacking of money or dissatisfying with the job might be due to their situation in real life. For some people who are dump and not able to access to the living standard, they are prone to struggle with finding initiatives to improve their life. In other words, they have no choice and no matter how hard they will try, everything will be to no avail. In addition, it is not an exaggeration to say that some people are extremely lazy and all they do is merely blame on their faith or completely depend on others and their luck.
On the other hand, there are some compelling reasons for us to support the second notion. Firstly, there is a saying:” Hard work pays off”. As long as individuals have enough aspire and sacrifice, they probably strive to ameliorate their bad situations. As a result, they might not accomplish completely their goals though, it is still better because they have improved the situation even with just a small change. For instance, Albert Einstein had failed numerous times before successfully creating the light bulb.
In conclusion, in this life there is a diversity of adversities so I strongly believe that we should be proactive to change our life because we only live once so live without regretting anything.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, so, still, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75510204082 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61396272882 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578231292517 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6383495971 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171280855183 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586641282447 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604960568315 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912484095398 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504468926806 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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