Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
It is best to accept a bad situation , such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money is usually good things, which can be makes a man perfect.
In this matter of fact, an unsatisfactory job is also gives money with free frustration, which is undesirable for all peoples, however it is essential for career life to learn very tremendous scene.
Another most difficult problem is that, less or shortage of money in peoples life, in this situation people can not afford there entire life smoothly, hence solution is that, need to think about savings, luxury life.
In unsatisfactory job, some management people are behave is very low, they think the employee is like a slave we can attitude with them whatever I want. In fact, they think these person have no any personal life, in this position the employee can take different type of solution, like employee can directly talk with his boss after problem is sort out about the his problem. If he work well or face any difficulties whenever he want to complete the task, it can be share with his boss. It will help to normalize the situation.
Additionally, life is complicated where not have enough money for fulfill the basic requirements, survive from that situation is quiet impossible nowadays. Rich peoples are not wiling to help the poor peoples. In this case, social involvements is most wanted things like some interactive or welfare work done by the creative people, they can increase to money owner people for help the less benefited peoples. These peoples are also try to do others things for income more money besides there current jobs.
In this circumstance, all situation can be happen in entire life, so if the generation have not enough adaptability at that time they will fall in haphazard time, that is why - the situation whatever it is everyone should catch up on it. Mind should be flexible, it will assistance the people to cover up their hard time easily.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
It is best to accept a bad situation , such as an unsatisfactory job or shorta...
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Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mendous scene. Another most difficult problem is that, less or shortage of mon...
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Line 7, column 174, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'these people', 'these persons'?
Suggestion: this person; these people; these persons
...em whatever I want. In fact, they think these person have no any personal life, in this posi...
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Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
.... In fact, they think these person have no any personal life, in this position the...
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Line 7, column 359, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'his'?
Suggestion: the; his
...is boss after problem is sort out about the his problem. If he work well or face any di...
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Line 7, column 429, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...ll or face any difficulties whenever he want to complete the task, it can be share w...
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Line 9, column 434, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tried'.
Suggestion: tried
...nefited peoples. These peoples are also try to do others things for income more mon...
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Line 11, column 330, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple to cover up their hard time easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, however, if, so, well, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87048192771 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66562083577 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560240963855 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8629579267 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.384615385 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207827746976 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780024486041 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827435687822 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126619373364 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953795491882 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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