Almost every person has to face a difficult situation in their life journey, and while some people think that they have to run their lives according to the situation, like being unhappy at work or having a money crisis, others argue that they have to search for better opportunities and work hard to tackle the situation. In this essay, I will look at both sides of the argument and give my opinion.
First and foremost, some people are eager to change their job, whether they are satisfied with their work or not. Either way, they will stick with the situation because they have many struggles to get that job, but unfortunately, the work does not go as planned, due to which they have to accept it and work in that environment. In my perception, people have to take risks sometimes because if they work in that environment, they might not complete their tasks properly, which will hamper both the employee and the company. So that if the person is unsatisfied with their job, they have to search for another one.
On the other hand, it is best to change the plan. For example, if the person is in a financial crisis and suffering from a loss, they should ask for help rather than struggle with the situation. Similarly, it is more important to build up the confidence to deal with a bad situation. Sometimes people have to change their paths for a better life. For instance, some people work because of family pressure, but they may not have an interest in that work. At that time, they may change their work or make themselves strong to tackle the situation.
In conclusion, it is better to change the path or work even harder to face the difficult situation rather than accept it.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, similarly, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62790697674 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43787728558 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485049833887 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1649163232 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133189086768 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593619613265 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361607111471 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100108124307 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280228418611 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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