“Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others
argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.”
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is disputable that what is better for people, to confess the bad situation of life or take it as a challenge and go ahead. In my opinion, while there is no alternative than trying to overcome the bad situation, then people should give an effort to improve their life.
On the one hand, some supine people believe that since fate control everything, there is no reason to dream for betterment. Furthermore, if they are demotivated in the profession or they do not have enough money, they accuse their fate as well as try to be happy with what they have. In this way, they do not want to try for betterment or take any challenge in their life. For instance, one of my cousins strongly believed that, as he is poor he will get better in heaven.
On the other hand, people who are energetic and vigorous, always want to change their present unstable situation with their sincerity and hard work. However, I strongly believe that people should always try to fulfill their dream and they should not always stick in the worst present situation of life. Because, if they do not experiment to get better life how they overcome this situation. To show an example is, one of my friends was demotivated with his career, which leads him to left his job and turn him to start his new business with more uncertainty in his life. He became a millionaire within five years. Hence, ones ‘should try to change the present condition through hard work.
In conclusion, though some people believe that bad situation, in this essay I tried to assert that, people must attempt to improve their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple must attempt to improve their life.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67615658363 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47964318733 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512455516014 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5018737204 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.076923077 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165456481103 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652541863075 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523146989283 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125719927958 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433388603628 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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