Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are some more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
The major cause of adverse environmental effect in the contemporary world is the annihilation of biodiversity, some people argue that. While others may confide it has multifarious significant reasons. In my opinion, though the extinction of a diverse range of living organisms and creatures is one of the grounds for climate change, there are various human created issues that play a crucial role to destroy the diversity of nature.
Firstly, Human being intended to do deforestation and logging for urbanization, which is the root of climate change, and responsible for the extinction of biodiversity. If the trees and organism do not retain the harmony of ecology, several pollutant particles will devastate the community. For instance, a survey says that land with dense vegetation keeps their community bloomy and long-lived. In this way, the expend of distinctive kind of plants and animals are the base for climate change.
However, I opined that there is assorted significant environmental puzzle nowadays, which make the earth unstable. Such as, contamination of air by the emission of the carbon footprint from industry and vehicle is a crux in an urban area. Similarly, a natural disaster like drought, famine and e flood also occurs for global warming. Moreover, throwing hazardous waste to the ocean put in the water table high in coastal areas. To illustrate, some environmentalist says that, most of the capitalist nations resolve to build skyscrapers through deforestation which form more intense environmental hazards.
In conclusion, though the attenuation of some generic species of the world, which is venturesome for the environment, is conceived by some people, however, other's valid reasons are more acceptable to mitigate climate change during this period.
Comments
Hey Manvee
Hey Manvee
It was an astonishing essay with relevant vocabulary and informative ideas; however, you would lose your score in the task achievement as it is asked that you need to explain both views and finish with your opinion. The essay doesn't introduce both perspective. I have done the same mistake while ago, hence I feel like to bring your attention on it. My apology if I offend you.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...f biodiversity, some people argue that. While others may confide it has multifarious ...
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Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ity bloomy and long-lived. In this way, the expend of distinctive kind of plants and anima...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46570397112 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08440605525 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642599277978 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9620936029 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.461538462 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167983351253 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514168629864 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632650521377 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104845889451 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510611563602 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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