Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are some more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
The major cause of adverse environmental effect in the contemporary world is the annihilation of biodiversity, some people argue that, while others may confide it has multifarious significant reasons. In my opinion, though the extinction of a diverse range of living organisms and creatures is one of the reasons for climate change, there are various human created issues that play a crucial role to nature diversified.
Firstly, Human being intended to practice deforestation and logging for urbanization and these are the sake of climate change. These are also root for the extinction of biodiversity, which retains the harmony of ecology and restrains society from several pollutant particles. For instance, a survey says that land with dense vegetation keeps their community bloom and long-lived. In this way, the fall of distinctive kind of plants and animals are the occasion for climate change.
However, I opined that there are assorted environmental problems nowadays. Such as, contamination of air by the emission of the carbon footprint from industry and vehicle is an acute environmental problem in an urban area. Similarly, a natural disaster like drought, famine and the flood occurs for global warming. Moreover, through hazardous waste to the ocean put in the water table high in coastal areas. To illustrate, some environmentalist says that, most capitalist nations resolve to build skyscrapers through deforestation which raise more intense environmental hazards.
In conclusion, though the attenuation of some generic species of the world is venturesome for the environment, which is conceived by some people, however others valid reasons, are more liable to mitigate the climate change during this period.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55471698113 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06301679912 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630188679245 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6362649595 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209856685206 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674449695338 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623597426432 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123670361781 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470103461356 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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