Many people believe that reducing the speed limit is the best option for road safety improvement. Do you think there are other measures that could be in place? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
It is often argued that the foremost solution for secured transport system is attenuate to the speed of the vehicles by the government. Though speed is the significant reason behind increasing calamity of the street, I strongly believe that there are other detrimental phenomena, which is accountable for a road accident around the world. This essay will assert both the benefits and drawbacks with relevant examples.
Undoubtedly, the aptitude of the driver increases the velocity of transport, which is a major cause of the traffic accident. If drivers followed the rules of the speed limit, they would eliminate the jeopardy of numerous street accidents. For instance, in 1993, the Canadian government took the initiative to limit the speed of the vehicle, which decreased the road accident significantly. However, there are other multifarious events, which exacerbate the road accident rather than limiting speed, should be restrained.
In my opinion, the government can take into consideration some fundamental issues, such as, raises the awareness of people, frequent check of fitness and license to name but a few, which is inevitable regarding this factor. Moreover, people can save themselves by wearing safety belts while they are on the road. To illustrate, in 2002, the Bangladesh government forbidden all the vehicles without a license, which had an effective result. In this way, the initiative of the state can curtail the mishap in order to improve road safety.
In conclusion, various technic can enhance road security, and surely limiting speed is one of them. However, there is some other undeniable ground, which hinders the progress, also should conduct more carefully.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'attenuated'.
Suggestion: attenuated
...olution for secured transport system is attenuate to the speed of the vehicles by the gov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41509433962 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82426045793 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618867924528 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6936890852 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.384615385 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194382246142 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680248602899 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483113679563 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114292813518 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315539577077 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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