Many people believe that reducing the speed limit is the best option for road safety improvement. Do you think there are other measures that could be put in the place? what are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Essay topics:

Many people believe that reducing the speed limit is the best option for road safety improvement. Do you think there are other measures that could be put in the place? what are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Many may argued that the foremost solution of the secured transport system is attenuation of the speed of vehicles. though speed is the significant reason behind increasing road accident, I strongly believe that there are other detrimental phenomena , which is concerned to road accident. this essay will assert the both benifits and drawbacks with relevant examples.

undoubtedly, the impulse of driver to increase the velocity of the transport is a major cause of the traffic accident. If the driver abide by the rules of speed limit, they would avoid the jeopardy of numerous street accidents. For instance, in 1993,canadian government took the initiative limiting the speed of the vehicle, which decrease the road accident significantly. However, there are other multifarious reason rather than limiting speed, which exacerbate the road accident should be initiated.

In my opinion, there are some fundamental initiative, which can take, such as, consciousness of people and license check, is inevitable, regarding this issue. Moreover, people can safe by abiding the rules and regulation of traffic. to illustrate, in 2002, Bangladesh government annihilate all the vehicles without license, which result was amazing. In this way, government can take some definite initiative in order to improve the safetyness of road.

In conclusion, various technic can help to enhance the road safety and limiting speed is one of them. However, there are some other reason, which hinder the progress.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52173913043 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89130177326 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7161079882 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6923076923 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200050017122 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674846964989 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475672055269 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122378322819 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034100975708 0.056905535591 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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