It is sometimes said that the countryside offers a high quality of life, especially for families. What are the arguments for and against families choosing to live and work in the countryside, for example as farmers? What is your own view about this?
It is often argued that people get a high quality of life in the village rather than a town, especially who has a family. Though there is some inconvenience to stay in rural, I believe the rustic life is best for the family with children. This essay will give some arguments with relevant examples considering this issue.
Undoubtedly, urban life has some ease and amenities, which gives people a comfortable life. In the city, people do not feel any jeopardy about their health care system as well as the education of their child. Moreover, they would easy access to get a diverse range of food and entertainment, which is rare in the countryside. For instance, a recent survey shows that any bustling city has good educational institution and renowned hospitals. It also ensures the nightlife of their dwellers.
However, people with family can live and work with peaceful mind in rural areas with fresh air and foods without any contamination. Moreover, children can play in open space without immerse in computer and internet, who had great chance to be obese by living a sedentary life. To illustrate, a research of Cambridge University shows that, most of the dwellers in rural areas, who live in a village are lead a peaceful life, since they are naive.
In conclusion, though city life ensures all of the convenience of their dwellers, rural life has some mindfulness, which not only makes people delighted, it has a great impact on their children. Farmers are the great example of that, who establish their happiness in countryside by their hard work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96212121212 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72296587545 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4006652563 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.769230769 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171928623031 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600014148198 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382021101081 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106166015103 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537004689643 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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