Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatifactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both views and give your opinion

In life, poor circumstances sometimes can happen in our life. While some people think that the best way to deal with them is by accepting it, others choose to strive and try to make a better situation. I completely agree with the latter that struggling to change into better situation is the best choice when facing unwanted circumstances.

On the one side, some people opine that accepting unwanted situations is a better choice. This is because they believe that by accepting the situation, they will not experience the stress that will be resulted from struggling in changing the situation. For example, some people who are paid with low wages choose to accept their situation and are not thinking about solutions to get out from the circumstances. Because they just do what they need to do and not striving to search for solutions, they become happy and stress-free.

On the other side, other people opine that struggling to change the unwanted situations is the best thing to deal with unwanted circumstances. This is because they believe that by striving, they will be able to get out of such situation and finally be in a better situation. For instance, a guy feels uncomfortable with his current job description as a salesperson. Because of that, he keeps working on improving other skills which can help him to get another position. Finally, his hard work pays off and he can get the job that he wants.

In conclusion, accepting unwanted situations is good because it can make people happier and stress-free, but struggling to change unwanted circumstances is better because it can make people to get out from those situations and be in the situations that they wish for.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9298245614 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81873868616 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6761384274 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.076923077 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23688188034 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947242784766 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713359184373 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161755770942 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177573740859 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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