With the advancement in information technology people are now learning and working on multiple skills and taking part in multiple jobs to secure good future. I disagree with the affirmation that doing multiple job will secure a protective future and is highly required. We should focus our current job while procuring new skills.
Firstly, it is currently a common phenomenon that people are nowadays taking part in multiple jobs and they may lead to over exertion and tremendous pressure physically and psychologically. Although, we continues changing technologies and tools it is highly important to constantly learn new skills but, taking extra burden by working on two or more jobs in not appreciable. It is often observed that many people are not good at undertaking myriad number of tasks at the same time. This may lead to mistakes which will hamper the overall performance of an employee. We need to be prolific in our work profile and we should meticulously work to attain good result.
Secondly, It is highly desirable in my opinion to work on a single job and continue to grow in current job by attaining new niche skills. One can advance in his or her career by following a well defined career path. This path may include doing certifications and gathering new knowledge by means of colleagues or online learning center. Meanwhile, people can work on changing a profile an working on a new job.
Hence, in conclusion, the foregoing discussion will propounds to the views that it is not a good idea to work on multiple jobs we should focus only on one job at a time this would flourish our future endeavors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'continue'
...cally and psychologically. Although, we continues changing technologies and tools it is h...
Line 6, column 387, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
..., people can work on changing a profile an working on a new job. Hence, in conc...
Line 8, column 53, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'propound'
...nclusion, the foregoing discussion will propounds to the views that it is not a good idea...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90579710145 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83623225434 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525362318841 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7618921368 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.153846154 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189288619648 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727447733377 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516040779191 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135486783922 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547818637549 0.056905535591 96% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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