Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Information is the oil of the 21st century and analytics is the combination engine . Some of the populace ponder that, it is a fine to split as much documents as possible in factual research, professional and the educational world , while others reckon that ,some detail is to quintessential to share freely.
On one hand , all sectors are being balloon by means of technologies like business, research and educational fields. It is good to split as much as possible in these are sectors : in technology fields, there are multitude of gadgets have been made by scientists ,so authority should allow knowledge about how to utilise into works, scientific invention and theories ought to be shared because ,some researchers are made people's life faster and easy , also teachers must divide data related education for making educated children in particular themes. For an example , India where administration has shared crucial information about covid-19 by means of television and news paper such as free vaccination -whether a person has corona virus not ; immediate lockdown - to keep mask when meeting other people and splitting data about how to stay away from Corona pandemic.
On the other hand , much information requires payment to produce and maintain. Also, certain types of data in the wrong hands can be devastating for society. First and for most, authorities ought not to share figure regarding secret plans , national security for rescuing residents from Dynamiters. Moreover, splitting ideas are dangerous for business tycoons, the leaked ideas can cause loss and personal account details should not be shared by friends and locals. For an instance Canada ,where authority has banned some show and some online application related crimes which are giving fire ideas to commit misdemeanors , on account of that there proportion of crime rates are decreasing vis -`a - vis to other nations.
In my opinion , distributing information upon free of charge can help in certain aspects , but it can also be detrimental for societies as well as country.
To conclude, government must divides documentation ,which is fruitful for students as well as workers however, some figures related Nation's Security and economy of nations have not split.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, as to, in fact, in particular, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36056338028 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83554060779 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616901408451 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.85572098 49.4020404114 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.583333333 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5833333333 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 66.0 5.01903807615 1315% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245469652359 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886550425593 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562579871364 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130208167472 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074343034785 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.