Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Other believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
In today's world information is everything.we need information about things we do or about people to maintain good relationship with them. But as we know "every coin has two sides". The information we get can be used for good as well as evil. So many people believe that we should share as much information and knowledge as can about business, scientific research and academic knowledge to the world but other says that some information could not be passed no to others freely as they are too valuable
The knowledge we get in school passed down by are teachers so that we can get basic idea about the world and some can continue the research that the scientists could not complete in the past. There is a saying that " knowledge increases by sharing". The shared information of an object or a person can help us to understand them and how we need them.
On the other hand, some information could be used against us or to harm us as well as the our community. For example, map of a bank or an army base can lead to major problems if in wrong hands so it is important to avoid that by not sharing valuable information like this unless and until needed. Some personal information like information of one's bank account, could not be shared with anyone in any case. There is another saying that "knowledge in wrong hands can destroy the world".
So, my point of view in this topic is that it is good to share knowledge or any information to other on tha condition that it is not used to harm anyone. Knowledge shared could be used to improve our community and surrounding.
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| 2020-09-23 | mayur3020 | 67 | view |
| 2020-09-23 | jaynil pandya | 67 | view |
| 2020-09-23 | jaynil pandya | 67 | view |
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- Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research business and academic world Other believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely 67
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 467, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...at some information could not be passed no to others freely as they are too valuab...
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Line 1, column 511, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o others freely as they are too valuable The knowledge we get in school passed do...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...sed against us or to harm us as well as the our community. For example, map of a bank o...
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Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ersonal information like information of ones bank account, could not be shared with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, for example, as well as, in any case, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61754385965 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7976158341 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470175438596 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 104.094875261 49.4020404114 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378057243441 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130531085976 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901535700691 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234261332412 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111182539964 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.