People’s opinions differ as to whether or not all information should be shared to society. While there are some arguments against the sharing of knowledge because of its importance and value, I still believe that the sharing is a necessary for many aspects of our life.
There are several reasons why people might argue that some information is too important or valuable to be shared freely. Firstly, competitiveness of corporations could be reduced if they show all the secret in the product process. Secondly, confidential documents of nations are also too valuable for public with all people. For example, there are various laws which have the scary punishment for people do these actions. Finally, some significant results of technology are also kept confidential by governments so that they could have more profits for their countries. For instance, in World War, most countries around the world kept secret about the development in weapons production to protect their alive of army and their freedom.
In spite of the above arguments, I support the view that publication of information has a significant role to the development of the world. A lot of modern creations which we had nowadays been all based on old knowledge had been published in the academic world. In fact, one of the most important things in our life, light bulb could be never created without publishing of the information about the line of electricity in the past. Additionally, sharing as much as impossible also guarantee people to have equal chance to connect to the modern world. In my view, it is important for all people to could approach to all information.
In conclusion, sharing all information certainly has its drawbacks but I believe that the benefits outweigh them in the long term.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
People’s opinions differ as to whether or not all information should be shared to soc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my view, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07167235495 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87297826715 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552901023891 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7267315968 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2142857143 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289759087403 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103059408876 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813997811442 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187385264266 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458502035354 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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