Number of governments throughout the world believe that the best achievement is economic value while many people argue that other values are also important like economy. In my view, others types of progress are also valuable as the economic value.
There are two main reasons why it could be argued that economy is the most important goal. Firstly, governments believe that economy is the basis for other value. There are various values could be affected by impacts of economy such as education or environments. For example, undeveloped countries where have a weak economy always have a low-quality education for children. Secondly, with the development, people tend to overrate the importance of objects around us. This means that people need to work more time to create more objects and money so that forgetting the value of other things such as happiness or affections among people.
However, I would agree with people who believe that other progress have the same value with economy for a country. Although the effects of a weak economy, happiness is still one of the most valuable progress in many undeveloped countries. For instance, in recent years, Bhutan has deleted GDP index and changed it into happiness index as the most important and became one of most countries where the percentage of crime is the lowest. Additionally, other types such as pollution index or safety progress also play a significant role in our life. For instance, tons of CO2 are made by developed countries and make harmful impacts on people’s health.
In conclusion, while many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal, I still believe that there are number of other values are also making great impacts on our life like this.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09059233449 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61786350646 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501742160279 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4391612081 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.357142857 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39772092323 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131497324888 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769232405126 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262091406894 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621508430152 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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