Some people argue that there are a large number of choices at the present. I completely agree this point of view and I also believe that this also brings some drawbacks.
In my opinion, there are many reasons why people think that we have too many choices now. Firstly, it is undeniable of choices that available to us. For example, there are uncountable websites offering entertainment, TV shows, music, videos, many of which are free. Secondly, globalization is also making the world become smaller and create relationships in easier ways. For instance, cheap international flights have made overseas travel possible for millions of people. Finally, the development of technology also plays an important role in creating many choices for us such as jobs, accommodation or even food. In some recent years, in the field of occupation, there are a huge number of reliable online websites to search for a job such as Linkedin.com, Jobs.com, … with thousands of job inside,
Alongside with these number of choices is also some problems. When choosing a job in online websites, people could have thousands of choices and also thousands of review about these jobs. It is very easy to have a bad choice if a person does not have enough knowledge and experience about the job which they really to apply. Additionally, the same problem has been seen with opportunities for overseas study appealing, many abroad students are confused about where to go and which the path to take because of the large number of choices around them.
In conclusion, we are faced with a huge number of option in most aspects of life at the present, and it could bring some negative impacts on us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
Some people argue that there are a large number of choices at the present. I completely ag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91872791519 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72380180179 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565371024735 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2303245868 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.076923077 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237992914292 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904301312784 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746927869287 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148751142248 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639025764097 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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