Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research,business and the academic world other believe that some information is too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Sharing information is actual issue in our world where it has strong influence on people. There are various spheres of our life where information is more or less important for people working there on out life where information is more or less important for people working there on out of this.for this reason some people consider that it is good to share information while others think in opposite way.
For example,practically all scientists are glad to share information with ordinary people or other scientist.there is no competition in this sphere. Sometimes it is bad for govenment which scientific share the secret information with international spy but it will not hunt information.
There are some simple rules in academic world which limite informational sources between people. If person is interested in theme discussing with you and you are ready to keep talking then the person is interested in theme discussing with you and you are ready to keep talking then the person gives you all information what he knows for free .on the other hand,if the person knows much and he knows that you can not give him actual or new information then he will share information with you can not give him actual or new information then he will share information with you just for money. For example, student pay for his learning while two students can cooperate and share information with each other It is obviously that sharing information in business world can followes by releases There is large competition and it may takes much costs for companies .Companies loose their profit every day because some one can not keep silence especially it companies.
To sum up all above it is necessary to say that there are some spheres in which sharing information is a crime. In my opinion, in many cases information can be too important or sharing at all.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , practically
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...hat he knows for free .on the other hand,if the person knows much and he knows that...
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Line 3, column 633, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to while'
Suggestion: to while
...r example, student pay for his learning while two students can cooperate and share in...
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Line 3, column 832, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...e is large competition and it may takes much costs for companies .Companies loose th...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nd it may takes much costs for companies .Companies loose their profit every day b...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Companies
... it may takes much costs for companies .Companies loose their profit every day because so...
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Line 3, column 868, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...kes much costs for companies .Companies loose their profit every day because some one...
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Line 3, column 905, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, while, for example, in many cases, in my opinion, more or less, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91987179487 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84870633696 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464743589744 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.703084631 49.4020404114 285% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.555555556 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6666666667 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8888888889 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308520048081 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156224372567 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261179039046 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204536537393 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296996325711 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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