Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is indisputable that knowledge and information are the most valuable things in contemporary times. Sharing those are contentious issues among people all around the world. Regarding this matter, some people have the opinion that we should share, while others have a dissenting idea that all databases are not shareable. In the following paragraphs, both views will be discussed and finally, my opinion will be given.
To begin with, the positive views, to bring prosperity not only to a small society but also in the world we should share the findings, facts, and factors that have been earned by doing research. For example, in recent times, the world facing a pandemic, and every day many people died for it. If we share our knowledge of research such as DNA structure then it will be helpful for many researchers to make a vaccine and eradicate the global illness. Moreover, sharing business ideas will be beneficial for small retailers to make them stable and also help to reduce unemployment. For instance, after sharing the ride scheme from Amsterdam, a Bangladeshi boy made an app called Pathao for share rides which create a huge number of opportunities for unemployed people. Furthermore, sharing academic research will be very helpful for the development of a nation such as magnetism theory by implementing this Japanese try to make the fastest railway system in the world. If they succeed then they can improve their economic situation.
However, despite being advantages it has some limitations. First of all, if the corporations share their business strategies then their competitor will be increased, therefore, there is a risk of losing a good amount of revenue. After that, sharing research papers and data will increase plagiarism and now it is a growing concern among the researchers. It spoils the focus on research.
In conclusion, to sum up all the points above, sharing has both advantages and drawbacks. From my side, I will go with the former statement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10429447853 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79708181489 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59509202454 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3316106902 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8823529412 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2352941176 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247698472771 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786699322847 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371028078498 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148314043474 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614808547523 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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