Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
it is believed that people should be encouraged to share their all knowledge about science, business as well as academic work, whereas some others claim that it is valuable information that cannot be free to share it. this essay will highlight both sides of this problem based on my own opinions.
On the one hand, it is necessary to public the details about researches, business and academic work because of some reasons. First of all, providing information freely seems to bring readers more chances to access a huge amount of knowledge that is useful for their own purposes. For example, someone needs information like market, marketing campaigns, investments, manufacturing chains, to start up his own business; or graduates are finding materials for their researches to graduate from their university. libraries or Internet are two sources which provide them references but it seems to be not enough, especially major knowledge. Thus, sharing the information about those fields should be accessible for all individuals. Second, there are many people in poor villages or isolated places where they do not have opportunities to visit libraries. As a result, publicing the academic information is likely to bridge the gap and bring them chances to expand their knowledge.
On the other hand, some others suppose that authors should not public the information about their work without any costs. To begin with, it is obvious that readers need to pay for valuable knowledge that researchers have spent a lot of time and their enthusiasm on analyzing data and concluding results. authors therefore should be paied a fee regared as a recognization for their work. In addition, requiring readers to pay a fee for this information may make them more serious and concentrated on choosing which materials they need. it is seem to be that it develops individual's behaviors in reading and creates the values of academic work and boosts the healthy reading habits.
In conclusion, there is some information people can public freely to make the life more useful. However, I personally believe that academic or major knowledge should require some fees to recognize the value of work and increase human's reading behaviors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20168067227 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79445144486 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53781512605 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4735211632 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0625 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.625 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24875977429 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864384733859 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811973999193 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185092585611 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680536545821 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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