Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Facing to the ease of available information in our globalized world some people have argued if it s a benefit or a downside to share all of them.
Allow to everyone to share information and get free access to them can represent a truly educative purpose. As a result more people will be able to get a better knowledge and to enlarge their culture.
Moreover that could arise a stronger liaison among people who share same interests or hobbies in specific fields easing their communication and improving their potential knowledge. For example, nowadays Internet caused a major diffusion of information among people all over the world who can share each other valuable notions and data.
Nevertheless in my opinion the disadvantages overshadow the benefits. In fact more shared and free information can lessen the control over them, because it becomes more difficult to check them. Thence it is enough easy running into fake or bad data that can mislead you in the research.
On the contrary this problem would not arise if the access to them was restricted. In addition free access for everyone to certain information could be used by criminals or terrorists in order to achieved their wretched goals in a more destructive way. For instance i believe that most of the suicide car bombers who struck western countries, over the last few years, could have emulated the first ones who committed the terrible deeds. As mass-media spread these facts all over the world. Consequently it could have had a domino effect on other easily influenced people who realized how could be effective to kill persons using a simple car or truck.
In conclusion i argue that some information should be forbidden to the mass by the governments owing to their national security.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...each other valuable notions and data. Nevertheless in my opinion the disadvantages oversha...
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...in a more destructive way. For instance i believe that most of the suicide car bo...
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Suggestion: Consequently,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01016949153 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71953153443 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586440677966 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0971968854 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.571428571 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3571428571 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212879719835 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709951407051 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556455694301 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120180299828 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412694100504 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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