some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show care about them. Others think that there are better way to show affection. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
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Some people think giving gifts and presents is significant to reflect your affection towards near and dear ones. Others, however, consider this is not the best way of showing your love. I, personally, feel that staying with them in rainy days is much better option to exhibit your care and attention.
On the one hand, no one can deny that gifts are and will remain token of love. In modern days, it has become a trend to give presents to their family and friends. As they want to demonstrate their love and care towards them. For example, gifting a present on special occasion such as birthday party, marriage party, at the time of promotion, starting a new business, standing first in schools and colleges is considered auspicious. People feel excited and elated to exchange gifts to one another. Moreover, a gift to a wife by her husband is invaluable and priceless. This gift always reminds her about her life partner and the fond memories associated with them. Also, gifts and presents help to build up strong and healthy relations between the giver and the taker.
On the other hand, the litmus test of true love and care is when someone is in trouble. Giving gifts on some occasion might be good but the best way to express your feeling is to stand by them through thick and thin. To prove my point, a father or a mother plays significant and massive role for their children. But, if they are unable to spend quality time with their children, no gifts can bridge the gap between them. What is more, if your known are seriously ill or hospitalized or facing some financial problem and you have no spare time to ask them how they are, all your presents are meaningless, useless and hollow. It is high time to think that no precious item or items can replace your physical, moral, financial and social support to them at crucial time.
In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that presents and gifts could realize someone’s positive feeling, but the real check to depict how careful and loving you are, is your compassion and physical availability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 10.4138276553 269% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74238227147 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45742726241 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573407202216 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7069242069 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1111111111 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0555555556 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29614321935 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879383286274 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060605701725 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182782826722 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832033483501 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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