It would be argued by some that only people living in the city must have an imbalanced diet. In my opinion, however, a person should raise public awareness and healthy eating.
On the one hand, there are a number of reasons why some believe that people living in the city want to public health campaigns. The major of people aged 3 to 35 who live in the city eat too much fast food and pre-made food. Increasing weight problems suffer from various health issues. In addition, some people live in urban are has sedentary lifestyles cause them to various health problems such as high blood pressure, stoke heart, attack, cancer…so on. For example, my cousin always eats fast food, sugary drinks as a consequence was obesities.
On the other hand, I would argue that we can take care of ourselves, we must have a balanced diet. Instead of eating pre-made food. All of the people would improve public health, take part in public health campaigns. Besides, the younger generation tries to eat more vegetables and fruit, make healthier food choices. Exempli Gratia, Mai is my friend, she was decreased from 60kg to 45kg by taking regular exercise, participating in health protection programs, and improve weight problems.
In conclusion, although some people think that just only people who live in the city must have a healthy diet. I personally believe that the responsibility of individuals to take care of health and gives people more chances to stay healthy, escape the potential health
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- The chart below gives information about the amount of time children spend with their parents 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94023904382 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54148294688 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581673306773 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4512015152 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5714285714 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255845117985 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870011519265 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738931583157 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179676947455 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855671814089 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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