Some people believe it's better to work for a company while others prefer running their own businesses. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
it is true that some people still believe that working as an employee is a good option, While others find it is more attractive to start their own businesses. Personally, I tend to prefer the first option for several reasons.
there are some main reasons why people want to run and manage their own firms. As a boss, they can have a flexible schedule for themselves to work effectively. For instance, they can work anywhere and anytime instead of being in the office all day long. this can help them reduce much of their time of traveling to the office, and therefore, they are able to solve more problems. Another reason that explains why being an entrepreneur is so attractive is that they may gain respects from society since they have a successful lifestyle and their contributions to the community. For example, as a top manager, they are not only able to produce more job opportunities for people but they can also handle many social issues such as health care treatment, education, infrastructure since they have money to do so.
However, I believe that working for a company has its own advantages. The first reason is that those working as a staff are more likely to earn a stable income. In other words, they can avoid the risk of going bankrupt, compared to owing firms. By this way, they do not have to worry as much as entrepreneurs do. Secondly, it is easier for staff to complete their tasks because of the workload is fairly distributed among their members. that is to say, they will have more time for other parts of their lives such as traveling or simply just caring more about their family. As a result, they can work effectively to make more profits for the company due to they have good standards of living.
In conclusion, although starting a business has many benefits, I believe there are undeniable reasons to consider to work for the company
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, it is true, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72036474164 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58975483957 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525835866261 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.594955132 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8125 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241127411085 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977963241963 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812012765118 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181041570078 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660590409441 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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