Some people believe that it is valuable to do experiments with viruses and bacteria however others think that it is dangerous so should not be done. To which statement do you agree?
It is a proved fact that life around and within us is full of bacteria and microbes which are uncountable and most of the times invisible to human eyes. Researchers, around the globe keep on experimenting about viruses of different types time to time. In my opinion, it is important to study about bacterial functionality, so that it could be used for the well being of the humanity.
First argument to support my view-point is that since the time advancements in medical field are made, scientists have rigorously studied about different viruses which caused severe epidemics.They researched about everything like how any form of bacteria develops and affects human body. After they succeeded to find cure, doctors were able to conquer deadly diseases such as plague, chickenpox and cholera which affected thousands of people. So, such experiments play crucial roles in finding cures.
Besides this, we often study that there are two types of bacteria; good bacteria and bad bacteria. Good bacteria are helpful for better growth and overall good health. Many healthy bacteria are used in the form of medicines to cure certain diseases. If viruses are having such significant presence in our lives, then why do we fear to explore about such useful entities?
However, some people believe that it is quite risky to experiment with some viruses as results are always unpredictable. Recent pandemic Covid-19 which hit the world significantly is said to be the outcome of a bacterial experimentation done in China. Thousands of people lost their lives in many countries due to it. So, such procedures should be avoided at all costs, otherwise, it could be devastating.
To conclude, researches about viruses should be conducted in a safe manner. Precautionary measures should be considered thoroughly before initiating any experiment. Without any doubt, these initiatives will help experts develop remedies for life threatening pandemics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, so, then, well, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32142857143 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90355420181 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633116883117 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0011977504 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4117647059 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1176470588 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251480726432 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738957664995 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515033917351 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127973264749 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648224730179 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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