Crime, which is a big headache for the governments of many countries, has posed a threat to social security. Different kinds of antisocial incidents such as bank robbery and random murders or shooting are rampant in many cities. In order to address this social problem, some suggest that the government should adopt lengthy imprisonment to fight crime while others propose other strategies to achieve the same goal. From my perspective, the idea of longer prison sentences is more viable to create a crime-free society.
On the one hand, there are two alternative strategies offered to deal with social offenders. First and foremost, death penalty might be a possible solution to disciplining those who are involved with felony/horrible/horrendous crimes such as murder and arson. With this method, the rate of crime will decrease significantly because criminals need to risk their life facing the capital punishment. Education is another way to prevent antisocial behavior. Parents and teachers, for example, can show children crime-related videos so that they instill into their next generation socially acceptable values like the importance of observing law. As a result, children exposed to a law-abiding environment are less likely to do something against society after they grow up.
On the other hand, longer prison sentences are literally a better measure to reduce crime rates on the ground that the horrors of jails can stop people from breaking the law. The first immediate impact is that prisoners are very likely to suffer mental problems. Being confined to a cramped, dingy, and small space for a long period of time, people might mentally break down. Another repercussion is the loss of freedom and dignity for long. After being incarcerated, law offenders are treated as animals that have to listen to the orders given by warders. Even disturbing, though, is that inmates will be cut off from their families. Forced to be isolated from society, they are deprived of the pleasure of staying with their beloved ones.
In conclusion, both the two views have pros and cons, but a longer prison sentence is a more effective way to minimize crimes in a certain country as its strength far outweighs the rest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17222222222 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89505751665 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7661200412 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.444444444 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224797455411 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058459680558 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640743735224 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140538484313 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505231726262 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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