Some people believe that money is the major source of happiness. Do you agree or disagree?
Minority of populations is convience if the bliss depends on financial. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that hapiness of person come from how to creating some convenience by own self.
First of all, income can't guarantee happiness of someone absence for money people have ability to survive their life. Even many people has a lot of money still facing the big problem in life. In other words, majority of rich people has a significant conflic in their family and that problem sometimes not exist in poor family. For instance, 15% of the affluent people i know is have a many problematica in their life and approximately the mistake was came from a broken family until they lack of affection from their parrents and most of them looks like depression. That's why that all factor of happy not only calculated by money.
Secondly, another reason is because has several case of terrifying. Lately, almost everyday occured calamity of criminal that make all people scared about that situation. Moreover, the homicide was became a hot issue that resulting majority of every single person interest to know about it. For example, everyday on Indonesian station TV will always share about amount of people die with a lot of reason based on it, the high percentage of the criminal case from mudder and the background that case about serveral inhabitants envy of a person who has a lot of money until they decide to emphasing and killing that people. Thus, volatility not only about the financial, however how we manage it and don't making turbid the situation.
To conclude, the financial not as a solution of happy but can be boomerang to our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86219081272 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57045219033 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593639575972 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.3315402327 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.846153846 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165874566282 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571668907903 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434353742999 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845930083009 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422311205447 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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