Some people believe that nowadays we have to many choices. To what extend do you agree or disagree.
For decades, with the proliferation and civilization of the world, people now have more things to choose from only a brand for a pack of yogurts to their whole careers. Therefore, it is reasonably regarded that we have to give out so much decision these day. This essay implicitly advocates the idea upward thanks to the modernization of our municipalities that leads to diversity of choices, and also corresponding to the financial races in companies.
First of all, the reason that strands out the most is attributed to the emergences of demand to support people’s life. Concretely, having been developed the technologies, they provides us a more efficient and productive way of manufacturing, ergo, different kind of products have been made not only in ingredients, usages, but also brands. For example, when a person want to buy a soap, he/she can either way search it on Google or directly buy it at the grocery with different amount of money and then, quality. As a result, this phenomenon gives pupils more options to select the good that best fit them.
Moreover, the world is being innovated day by day as regard to our demands. Technologies, specifically machines, are made to support pupils to have their job done easier and costs less efforts to accomplished, this still the same to errands and people’s life. Amazon-one of the multi-billion companies on earth- was once created by Jeff Bezos in order to give out a faster and more convenient means of shopping; In addition, Chanel and other fragrance franchises were brought to us so as to satisfy our necessities. Thus, the more people need, the more things that need creating, coincidently, people have more choices for their provinces because more new domains emerge explicitly.
In conclusion, it is true that we have to decide a lot of things attribute to our needs and the renovation of countries. Although, we spend more time choosing things, pupils have wider range of goods and the accessibilities to helpful equipment.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...at we have to give out so much decision these day. This essay implicitly advocates the id...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 176, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...g been developed the technologies, they provides us a more efficient and productive way ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun efforts is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...to have their job done easier and costs less efforts to accomplished, this still the...
^^^^
Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...fragrance franchises were brought to us so as to satisfy our necessities. Thus, the more...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, thus, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02710843373 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9874219191 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593373493976 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.9354401236 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.384615385 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3076923077 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116589904619 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427031997511 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365340339273 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785377860151 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220426753097 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...at we have to give out so much decision these day. This essay implicitly advocates the id...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 176, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...g been developed the technologies, they provides us a more efficient and productive way ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun efforts is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...to have their job done easier and costs less efforts to accomplished, this still the...
^^^^
Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...fragrance franchises were brought to us so as to satisfy our necessities. Thus, the more...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, thus, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02710843373 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9874219191 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593373493976 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.9354401236 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.384615385 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3076923077 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116589904619 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427031997511 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365340339273 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785377860151 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220426753097 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.