Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Choices are sometimes extremely powerful that can change one's life completely. It is argued that there are too many options these days. Personally, I agree that we have to many choices, yet I still suppose that having numerous choices does not mean we can easily make selection due to a variety of reasons
On the one hand, we ourselves do have too many choices. This abundance of options is attributable to the ever-changing world. In other words, the world renews itself every hour, giving human tons of new information, new issues, new trends and movements, and more things to concern about. Take the kids today and those from three decades ago as examples for this point. No matter that stage are they in, their means of entertainment still vary, however, the children these days absolutely have more to select, even too many. Another instance is transportation. Back in old times, people had nothing except for trains and cyclos, whereas people in modern days have many of them, such as bus, train, motorbike, plane, underground, boat and coach, each for specific demands. As such, there exists too many choices for people, and this phenomenon accelerates second by second.
On the other hand, as I have argued in the first place, having too many options does not result in any more perks, even bring more drawbacks to our lives. Living in such ever-changing world, we can sometimes struggle with the paths we choose, the paths that can turn our lives over a new page. For example, graduated pupils now have to deal with countless career and other substitutes. They wonder what to do a lot, whether going abroad as his/her parents insist or working in a well-paid company as his/her relatives suggest. Moreover, in some families in which prejudices still deeply root, the children even do not have a selection to choose, they must obey thier parents and do not stand a chance to reason. In this regard, having more choices are hard to many people, even meaningless to some people.
To sum up, I myself agree that people nowadays have too many choices, yet I still reckon that the idiom "the more the merrier" is not rational in this situation. Suppose that we had less options than we are having, maybe life would be a bit more comfortable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...imes extremely powerful that can change ones life completely. It is argued that ther...
^^^^
Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun options is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... in this situation. Suppose that we had less options than we are having, maybe life ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, well, whereas, except for, for example, such as, in other words, to sum up, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85271317829 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54098074334 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0576206695 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313933853345 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860780990129 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766703480467 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201881922682 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246631698633 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.