Some people believe that the only purpose of films is entertaining. Others say that films should have educational value. Discuss both view and give your opinion
There has been some debate and people has been saying entertainment is the only purpose of films while others believe that educational elements can be found in some movies.
On the one hand, movies is used as a mean of entertainment for a lot of viewers. Some people love to see excellent visual effects, famous cast members or directors. For this reason, action or sci-fi films such as the Avengers, Fast and Furious is highly welcomed by the viewers. For example, superheroes movies from Marvel and DC can always be seen among the highest revenue ones. In addition, people tend to find relaxing moments after a hard-working day so they often go to the cinema and watch some films in order to recharge themselves.
On the other hand, many people say that lot of films also feature some educational value. Movies which is one of the best way to transferred the information, is very useful in many situations, especially for science and history. For instance, teachers can showed a students a film about World War 2 to make students see the mistakes which was made in the past to avoid doing them in the future. After watching historical films, students will have the mind broaden and maybe the interest for history will be revived. In addition, the content in educational films will be a long-lasting memory for audiences.
In conclusion, although films are made for entertainment purposes, some of them offer very meaningful story after the film.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87449392713 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69762040129 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587044534413 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5238005323 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263653652465 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102512950362 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111826991411 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187725588151 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837823940576 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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