Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence. Give your opinio
If we define culture as shared beliefs, values, attitudes, and behaviors, it stands to reason then that a person's country of origin impacts their culture. . Is nationality the defining influence or is it just one of various factors? I would say both arguments have validity, on the contrary, I would lean towards the latter.
It is easy to understand the ‘defining influence’ argument. If someone is born and raised in a place, they will be heavily affected by it. Psychologists mention this as the ‘nurture argument’ - you are a product of your place. For instance, if your country's cuisine uses specific ingredients, you get used to those dishes but may cope with other less familiar tastes. If your country has a conventional style of music, bolero or red music, the ubiquity of it, and, as a result, tend to enjoy it more.
On the other side of the argument, we need to recognize the impacts of globalization. Most people have daily access and get exposure to other cultures. It all surrounds us- restaurants, movies, and international companies are everywhere. One of the advantages of globalization is that it offers us a choice of cultural opportunities to choose from. It is unlikely that you will find any resident of a specific nation who does not have preferences that stem from outside their country of origin. Besides, more and more people work, study, or travel abroad away from their country. Inevitably, these people will be suffered from new influences.
My own view is that while we are affected by our community, in this globalized world, one's country of origin is only one aspect of our common culture. We all adopt factors from other cultures on a daily basis, unavoidably or according to our preferences and experiences. To my mind, this is what makes the world such an attractive place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, so, then, while, for instance, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75570032573 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72181755526 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547231270358 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 307.0 20.2975951904 1512% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1460.0 106.682146367 1369% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 307.0 20.7667163134 1478% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 82.0 7.06120827912 1161% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255649587935 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.255649587935 0.084324248473 303% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146797687011 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321327223366 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 154.5 13.0946893788 1180% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -240.13 50.2224549098 -478% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 123.0 11.3001002004 1088% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.81 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.77 8.58950901804 265% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 124.8 10.1190380762 1233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 125.0 10.7795591182 1160% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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