Some people believe that personal happiness is directly related to economical success while others argue happiness comes from personal effort. Do you agree or disagree?
Few people think that economical triumph connected to self-pleasure. However, remaining perceive that it is acquired by hard work. This essay agrees that personal effort is the key aspect to acquire joy rather than successful status.
So as to financial freedom one requires either smart work or hard work. Many believe that being rich helps you to break down all the barriers in life. One of the grounds that this could be justified is that to become financially successful it requires all day hard work which leaves you with no leisure time rather working hard during the workhours and creating a free time for yourself which helps you be stress free and happy substantiate my view, people who do business has a comparative advantage of acquiring financial freedom rather leaving them with no time for personal life. Whereas, individuals working hard so as to lead a successful life has a considerable time for experiencing joy.
On the other hand, money is the key factor for achieving any material need in one’s life. The reasons that this could substantiate my view are, so as to buy or experience anything in life money is essential. This in turn leads to personal happiness. Whereas, working hard so as to achieve attainable goal takes a great deal to attain heights in life. To exemplify, working as a IT employee in a company has a great deal with a constant salary instead it also leads to compromise for needs in one’s life.
To conclude, this essay agrees that hard work is linked to joy in life while economical success is not as essential as self-effort to acquire self-happiness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rsonal happiness. Whereas, working hard so as to achieve attainable goal takes a great d...
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...ights in life. To exemplify, working as a IT employee in a company has a great deal ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, whereas, while, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87545787546 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76393469965 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.3028806136 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.384615385 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145484056141 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543720136183 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551996108634 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104262735996 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448718773258 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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