Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children
These days, it becomes a controversial topic that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas some of the society believed that homework happens to be an important role in the education of children. There are both advantages and disadvantages for student whose not be given homework by their teachers. In this essay, I absolutely agree that not burdening the students with homework will gives more merits rather than the drawbacks for several cases.
In the one hand initially, students who are not burdened by homework can relax their mind after school whose preventing the stress come. They won’t be able to get stressed-out because they don’t have to think about the pile of tasks after school and decline their leisure time. For example, some of the children get their mind stuck and tired after school which indicate they need a leisure time to refresh their mind such as playing sports, take a nap, or just have a time to rest their self. Secondly, to get several lessons, it is not only by doing homework, they can learn by another method whose not monotonous and get them bored. Due to rapidly developed technology, most of children preferred to learn by watching videos rather than answering questions from the teacher. For instance, by watching videos, it is explain clearly the plants anatomy visually through the colorful animation and interesting backsound. As the result, students exciter to study due to the different methods. So it is important to know that giving more homework is not really an effective methods to keep student studying at home.
Differs from benefits above, sometimes homework become an important role for several types of students. Some types of them necessary to be commanded by their parents to study whose need homework to be given. It is because their possibility to study at home is just by doing homework. For example, when children unpredictability addicted to play video games, their parents can’t do anything to stop them but command them to do the homework. Therefore, forcefully they will stop the video games and do their homework as the reason. So there is no doubt that give children some homework is only suitable for minority of the students.
In conclusion, from right here I stand that I believe that considering not to give homework to children the best decision because it is affecting their mental and physic health. In my opinion, it gives more advantages rather than the demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2082.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0411622276 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63840980807 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496368038741 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7628967932 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.578947368 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7368421053 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4246095023 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134778753667 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142245203246 0.0667982634062 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285855668166 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146970967362 0.056905535591 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.