Some people believe that children leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are complete waste of time
These days some people believed that children leisure time must be filled with educational activities, otherwise they are completely wasting time. There are both advantages and disadvantages for children if their leisure activities must be related with educational thing. In this essay I absolutely agree that it gives more advantages rather than the drawbacks for several cases.
In the one hand, the main benefit of that issue is if kids filled up with educational activity in their spare time it will improve their skills. Especially, if the activity related with their interest or even passion positively. Other than that, educational activities can be an intermediary to character building. It is because those activities such as worthwhile things to do instead of just playing in a playground or playing video games. For instance, when parents take their child to a sport centre and lead the children to join the weekly sport training. It will increase their skills in sport which is also build their competitive soul and creativity. Furthermore, the kids can get used to be productive since young and it will prevent laziness and careless become their behavior. So it is important to fill our kids leisure time with such as educational things.
Differs with the benefits above, encourage children to spend their leisure time in educational activities from another point of view will make them exhausted. It is because they have to be in school in the morning untill noon and a lot homework to finnish, which means basically those kids need a spare time for to fresh their mind. Some of the children need a video games or play in a playground with a limited time obviously which can release their pressure and refresh their mind. So it is depending on the children passion and personality. If they have a strong passion on something, it doesn’t matter to lead them spend their leisure time in educational activity.
In conclusion, from right here I stand that I don’t believed that leading the children to fill their leisure time with educational activities is such a bad idea because it will increase so many skills and build a good character. In my opinion, it gives more benefits to the students rather than the drawbacks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some
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... pressure and refresh their mind. So it is depending on the children passion and personality...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03485254692 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75884991727 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479892761394 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3472963281 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7222222222 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302484640625 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1050016849 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138398866752 0.0667982634062 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223928694187 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144178382772 0.056905535591 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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