Today education has become a priority of many parents seeking a good future for their children in rapidly changing world. However, children's hobbies also plays an integral part in their life because of tremendous beneficial reasons. This essay will consider factors for upholding to this view as well, why recreational activities are important in infants' life.
First of all, it brings the productivity in children's work. so, who does not familiar with maxim, All work no play makes Jack dull boy. Evidently, if the parents wants to their children become successful in their life so, they must to give time them for playing sports, games and watch television or what they want to pursue as per their interest. Thus, it will increase their intellectual power. Also, it will enhance the great ability to do work in a perfect way. Because it gives time for rest to mind and preserve the things that they have learned. Therefor, parents have to give time for leisure activities.
Moving further, the adolescents after complete their study feel lethargic due to the studying for long time without any break. Consequently, they become book warm and do work in slow pace. It also reflects their health because they does not play any game or physical activity. Most of children have victims of obesity disease, owing to work in monotony schedule relatively. Relatively, if they have some to play and spend time with their social group, it develops their body growth and mentality level. In terms of activities, they can practice lot of games and watch videos of cartoons and so on Such activities are far from being waste of time.
To recapitulate, parents should not to impose all time in study to their children instead of they ought involve their kids in recreational activities as well in study. so, infants can devote equal time for both essential activities as a results, parents can watch their offspring's fruitful life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ngs the productivity in childrens work. so, who does not familiar with maxim, All ...
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...ecome successful in their life so, they must to give time them for playing sports, game...
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Line 3, column 449, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a perfect way" with adverb for "perfect"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ll enhance the great ability to do work in a perfect way. Because it gives time for rest to mind...
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Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...also reflects their health because they does not play any game or physical activity....
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Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the children') or simply say ''Most children''.
Suggestion: Most of the children; Most children
...not play any game or physical activity. Most of children have victims of obesity disease, owing ...
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Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: OUGHT_SAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ought to involve'?
Suggestion: ought to involve
...study to their children instead of they ought involve their kids in recreational activities a...
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Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...creational activities as well in study. so, infants can devote equal time for both...
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Line 7, column 236, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...l time for both essential activities as a results, parents can watch their offsprings fru...
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Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n watch their offsprings fruitful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, so, thus, well, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99689440994 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54908413844 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580745341615 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6269811007 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3888888889 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185612268354 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614776120131 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409240548931 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117857574056 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046631370321 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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