some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your opinions
These days, the setting of homework is considered unnecessary. Whereas some people believe that giving homework still bring a lot of benefits for students. I strongly advocate that it's a vital aspect of education
First and foremost, there are several reason for this fierce objection. There is evidence to support the idea that homework is not really effective in education. Countries as Finland, where most school don't give the students homeworks, top international educational legue tables. With focusing on the quality of lecturers in class, school children could be transfered fully knowledge. Furthermore, many parents would agree that the setting of homework could increase the pressure in education. After a long schoolday, school chilren are to tired to study anything when they return home. This is a time for them to revitalise themselves instead of struggling with the complicating assignments. As a result, it is recognized that play time is as beneficial as study time from the perspective of brain development.
In spite of above argument, i support the view that homework is of utmost importance in the schooling of children. The main benefit is that homework helps them to revise the previous lesson as well as reviewing the knowledges they have studied in class. As children have to apply knowledge that they have learnt to finish their homework. Besides, homework encourages independent learning and enhances self- awareness. In class, the learning process is observed by teachers, however, they have to do the assignments by themselves at home without any observation or helping. In my view, it is essential for school children to evolve their independent learning habit.
In conclusion, homework certainly has its drawbacks, but i believe that the benefits outweigh them in the long term
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, however, really, so, still, well, whereas, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my view, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31358885017 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91542493609 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588850174216 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.1857524654 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.7058823529 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287423052475 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888360032791 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712098504831 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163697522699 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587886217208 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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