Some people believe that schools are no longer necessary, because students can get so much information through the Internet, and study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today there are numerous sources on internet that provide variety of study materials. Because of this reason, some people consider that it is not compulsory to go the school. However, I disagree with this notion, I believe educational institutes play a vital role in the comprehensive development of a learner.
To begin with, schools devlop adequate social skills in a child. These are brotherhood, co-operation and sharing that build up when child spend time with their peers that is impossible on internet based learning. Also, the disciplined atmosphere of the school impart manners like punctuality and respect of elders. For instance- reaching the school on time and follow a particular dress code helps a student to learn general etiquettes, that are impossible to learn from online studies.
Moreover, schools offer variety of extracurricular activities in which children can take part and reveal their talents. For example,certain students are good in sports than academics , so they can look for these in future. Besides this, sports, quiz and debates generate a feeling of competition among students, hence students always try to maximize their potential which ultimately helpful in progression of child. However, those who cannot cannot affort internet based learning can enroll in government schools which provide free education.
To conclude, though electronic learning is advantageous for the child because of its convenience, but educational institutes helps in intellectual, social and physical development ofthe student ,which is quite impossible through interent based learning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, look, moreover, so, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64730290456 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98792335083 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643153526971 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8944304964 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.416666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158638725359 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586233899027 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337984792617 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095389820481 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390856062235 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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