Some people believe that sending criminals to prison is the best method of dealing with them while others say that education and job training are better ways to help them. Discuss both views and give your opinion
people have different views about how to deal with offenders. While some people argue that imprisonment is the most effective solution, I am of the opinion that criminals should be provided with education and vocational training.
On the one hand, sending lawbreakers to prison is beneficial in some ways. Firstly, the majority aim of imprisonment is to maintain the stability of society. one reason is that severe criminals, such as murderers or terrorists, pose a threat to the community. therefore, imprisonment is a great way of keeping them away from society and prevent them from doing harm to innocent people. Secondly, putting offenders to prison can act as a warning for those who have an intention to violate the law. they have to know that they are likely to face-up with negative consequences likes: loss of freedom, social isolation, and separation from their loved ones if they carry out such a criminal act. As a result, it contributes to the creation of the law-abiding society.
On the other hand, I hold the belief that education and job training are the best methods. it is true that education and vocational training enable petty criminals to well-equipped with necessary skills so they can secure a stable job and earn a living. As a result, they are not likely to re-offend which leads to a decrease in the crime rate. Besides, these measures should be used to ease the financial burden of the jail system. The reason is that the authorities do not pay for the operation and maintenance of prison. therefore, governments are able to invest national budget in other necessary aspects such as education, healthcare, infrastructure.
In conclusion, I think that the government should provide education and job training for criminals rather than send them to prison.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09121621622 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90495753933 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564189189189 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0183653745 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6875 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274723027352 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771814884881 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791512488313 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180471816033 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058288261476 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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