Some people believe that the society should be based on rules and laws. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Several of inhabitants convinced that every single person must be follow every regulation and applicable verdict. I fully agree with this opinion and think that rules and laws is very crusial in everyday of our life.
Firstly, i believe that the rules that apply to social life in a country can make people more disciplined and organised. Through the rules that are set everyone will easily live their daily lives even with the gaps that arise between communities. In other words, the rules that apply can create harmony, justice and peace between individuals and even life becomes more orderly. For example, in a community or a village, guests are required to report if they are visiting for more than one day or 24 hours, which means that every visitor who comes to the village must first confirm with the village officials, this is applied so that order and peace arise between communities. That's why rules are very necessary to be applied and implemented in social life.
Secondly, The existence of applicable laws is able to uphold justice for all mistakes that are contrary to applicable norms. Laws are created to be obeyed and carried out, containing prohibitions and orders that must be carried out. The law is able to regulate the actions and behaviour of each person, any violations that occur will be subject to sanctions in accordance with the legislation. For example, in Indonesia, every resident who owns a vehicle is obliged to pay annual tax, if it is not carried out it will be sanctioned in the form of fines or imprisonment. Therefore, the law must exist and be transparent to its people so as not to cause issues that are inversely proportional to the truth.
To conclude, i strongly believe that rules and laws is very necessary in society because that can make alternative way to order and justice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... that rules and laws is very crusial in everyday of our life. Firstly, i believe that t...
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Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...sial in everyday of our life. Firstly, i believe that the rules that apply to so...
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Line 2, column 676, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...er and peace arise between communities. Thats why rules are very necessary to be appl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85256410256 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6283302034 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522435897436 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2460129781 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.461538462 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182344921264 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072193368208 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462462353391 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11897797621 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026937013377 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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