Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Volunteer work is an effective factor in several societies. Many people support the notion of making unprofitable community services a must for youngsters during leisure time. I totally agree with this statement as this essay will justify my agreement.
One of the first benefits of teenagers doing community work is that it is a useful way to take advantage of free time. Nowadays, most if not all teenagers spend their spare time on their mobile phones playing video games or even surfing through social media platforms just to fill their times in, this trend is wasting not only their time but also their talents and the effective role of theirs in a society. Through community services they would be distracted from their phones and more focused on their well-being. In addition, voluntary activities push the teenager to interact with other people, leading to the development of their social skills and building their characters to become more influential individuals. Therefore, unpaid community work can significantly benefit teenagers.
However, charity work is important for the society as a whole as well. Firstly, this type of voluntary work assists in improving the economic situation of a country, as youngsters are helping the poor or the disabled this leading to a decline in the poverty rate, thus prospering the community. Moreover, teenagers will be able to fulfill their duties towards their country and participate in building and developing their communities.
To conclude, I really support forcing teenagers to do unpaid community work as it comes back with many benefits on both society and young people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...efits on both society and young people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25670498084 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75546328461 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605363984674 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9343535252 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400106991178 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141863865889 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858974471277 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219909310081 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805944841934 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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