some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay any tax to the state. to what extent do you agree or disagree.

Essay topics: some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay any tax to the state. to what extent do you agree or disagree.

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The tax is regarded as a burden by dozens of citizens, because it can reduce people’s disposable income. I argue it is necessary for us to pay the tax, without it, the society will be in chaos.
The tax has a beneficial impact on public facilities which are sponsored by governments, including roads, schools and hospitals. Have no good the public transport system makes it difficult for people to commute, moreover it also causes damage to the traffic efficiency, triggering the traffic jam. Public schools have provided students with opportunities to be educated well, to enable them to gain knowledge, which is benefit the economy. Whereas, these public programs have less chances to be investigated by personal enterprises because of the profitless.
We also need to aware of the tax’s function to replace the wealth again through governments. For instance, in numerous countries, high salary group intends to pay higher taxes, while low earning groups are even subsidized by the nation.
Taxes also play a vital role in regulate individual’s behaviors. People are unlikely to present self-control which is unable to alter some bad habits. For example, the tax penalty can be imposed on cigarettes and wines to enable people to few consume in these aspects. They can be more health and the strain on medical systems will be reduced.
Opponent, however, over-higher taxes will inevitably restrain humans’ enthusiasm on work, as well as the entrepreneur do not want to start a business. Money is considered to be a power for lots of people, with money, they can improve their living standards and obtain the achievement. Without the hard work of these people and their willingness to show their talents, a country would not become prosperous and the welfare system could not be sustained.
I am convinced that taxes are the lifeblood of the economy although high taxes can have an adverse effect on economic growth.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14873417722 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90714294994 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607594936709 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1078789522 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175562094755 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566000208636 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331543550576 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883653105755 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410694661065 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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