Some people believe that travelling within a city is better by car while some other think bicycle is a better means. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Vechile plays an important part in our life. Vechile always help the person to move from one place to another. Today one of the most pressing concerns the given topic is which vechile is better for everyone;car or bicycle? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimension from both point of view.
On one side, there are many people who argue that the car is more useful things with in a city. They strength the view point claming that faster because car always help to move from one place to another within a few minutes and hour. In car have many features that man are use but sometimes car is not good that the reason behind this to create the pollution and increase the disease but it is not too much effective. So that why people use the car in a city. For instance, a recent survey conducted the Hindustan times which reveals that 7 out of 10 people prefer to use the car in a city. Moreover, they rhink that it is a better option for me at this time.
On the other side, there are many people who beleive that bicycle is very useful for human. They view point claming that physical fit. In these days, bicycle always help to fit in our body and some people think that bicycle also kill the disease for humans. Firthermore, many people prefer to use the bicycle in cities but bicycle are consuming more time and sometimes people are too late but bicycle help to maintain our body. For example, government start the many campus by use the bicycle because in the modern era, many doctors are also advise for patients to use the bicycle. So that why people use it.
As we have seen that, there is no single conclusion. There are number of answer to this question. I am balancing, however, i tend to beleive that its depend from person to person whereas, every vechile has own benefits like car is too much faster rather than bicycle as well as bicycle always help to decrease the disease for humans.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 543, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'advised'.
Suggestion: advised
...n the modern era, many doctors are also advise for patients to use the bicycle. So tha...
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Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...this question. I am balancing, however, i tend to beleive that its depend from pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46571428571 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14599579664 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.945907789 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2631578947 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4210526316 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73684210526 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188802827718 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593312196892 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516081468401 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104700971907 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451550602265 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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