Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that local host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and gives your opinion.
Today, the world contains with far more than hundred countries, and every country has many tribes and clans in which tradition and laws have already resembled into their primary customs. Some of them are very simply exclusive, and others are extremely inclusive.
Tribes which believe in fundamental ideology show that their culture and laws must be preserved in strict ways in order to maintain the purity of their customs. In that way, the outsiders have to follow their traditions. The insiders constantly fear about the factor that may bring by visitors that can effect on changing of primary customs. In a given example, The Saudi Arabian country has strongly maintained their custom. The female tourists have to wear head-cover even though they are not Muslim. If this law does not run well, outsiders' tradition may pollute the purity of local customs, then it can lead the young Arabian generation following outlanders' customs.
in another hand, the exclusive countries which believe freedom of speech, act, and conduct know the diversity of cultures. Therefore, they do not fear of changing traditions. They, in fact, know the new generation have to learn other custom and appreciate them. In a matter of fact, Indonesia has the biggest cultures and traditions in the worlds. To maintain its diversity, every tribe conduct their law to live harmoniously. In so forth, the visitors do not need to follow their custom only have to give them the right place to practice.
Above all, we have clearly to be smart to know other customs which are not inclusive or exclusive. In my opinion, it does not matter the tribes conservatively closed-mind or open-minded as long as they want their tribes to go on the right choice to run their tradition.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
..., the world contains with far more than hundred countries, and every country has many t...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ation following outlanders customs. in another hand, the exclusive countries w...
^^
Line 7, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he right choice to run their tradition.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, then, therefore, well, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0412371134 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59790177978 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560137457045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9801781353 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138710679148 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476320419963 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342860531993 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859821606783 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223678905184 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.