One major reason people love traveling is because travelers experience disparate culture and lifestyle in foreign country and region. In terms of local constoms and behaviors when visiting a foreign country, some people deem that visitors ought to behave in according to local culture; whereas, others oppose this idea and advocate that visitors can bebave as if in orgin country. This essay will discuss both views; however, this essay prefers the first approach.
To begin with, travelers should respect and conform native costoms and behaviors. Costoms and behaviors take extremely long time to form and these incorperate native culture and express specific meaning. When a visitor behaves according to native costoms and behaviors, they are also expressing their respect to local people and culture. Moreover, following local costoms and behaviors provides an opportunity for travelers to learn local culture, which is a part of fun drived from traveling. On the contrary, if travelers do not behave according to local costoms and behaviors, misunderstanding arise when traveler act offensive behavior inadvertently. For instance, a thumb-up gesture means praise in Chian; whereas, it also means comtemptation in New Zealand.
By way of contrast, to behave carelessly as if in original country is comparetively inapporpriate when traveling abroad. Firstly, people tend to behave causally in motherland. They pay little consideration to the feeling of others, which absolutely would offend native people when they are visiting in a foreign country. Secondly, native people may exhibit fidelity to their traditional costoms and behaviors. An offensive act will invoke unexpected conflict between native people and visitors. For example, refusal recongnition of god woll arouse radical response from muslins. Therefore, travelers had better to follow native costoms and behaviors to avoid trouble from native people.
To recapitulate, this essay suggests that travelers should follow local costoms and behaviors when visiting a foreign country.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71568627451 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83360470917 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6259176808 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.882352941 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137525006252 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461773518958 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349275082539 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979047114404 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364004465647 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.6 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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