With the development of science and technology and the supply of abundant food and other necessities, people's life expectancy extented. Longevety of oldly people induces immense influence both on society and individuals. This essay will discuss the impact on public and private and share the author's opinon on solve the problem of ageing population.
To begin with, longevity allows elders to enjoy longer life; meanwhile, families need to spend more time on caring for elders. Elders have the chance to meet their great grandchildren and enjoy the happiness of witness the birth of their descendents. In the meantime, the caring of serineties necessitates the families devote more time on it. Elders are vulnerable to disease due to their age and the deterirating physical condition.
Moreover, society needs to construct convient facilities to cater the seniors. Oldly people may require slope in entrance because they are no longer robust. In certain circumstance, wheel chair is a requisite for certain people. Therefore, more friendly facilities are needed to build for the safe commute of elders. For instance, all public building must install convient entrance for seniors.
Regarding the solution to alleviate the impact of ageing population, this essay suggests that mentle support must provided from both individuals and society, in addition to the completely friendly facilities for elders. Mentle support is vital important for elders who may fell lonely after retired, especially those whose spoude demised. Elders will live a happier life with mently support from society and strangers. For example, vulunteery work is a considerable way to care for elders.
To recapitulate, longer life expectency all elders to enjoy life and it also requires more caring and consideration on seniors. Apart from providing convenient facilities for elders, vulenteery work is a good way to support elders mently.
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Suggestion: great-grandchildren
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Suggestion:
...cessitates the families devote more time on it. Elders are vulnerable to disease ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81473867969 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557432432432 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2616761154 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4444444444 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181346636069 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560774743195 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456412066596 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104077273102 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054649395756 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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