Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human s life

Essay topics:

Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life.

Whilst several people support the idea that the former times can be considered as valueless and no knowledge can be achieved from them, numerous other, including me, hold the faith that history plays a key role as an information source in interpreting the life of humans

On the one hand, there is a variety of explanations for claiming that nothing can be learned from our past. One outstanding justification is that the difference between our antiquity and modern society is extremely significant, therefore, the experience of our predecessors cannot be applied to tackle the contemporary nerve-wracking issue. By the way of illustration, industrial techniques used by our ancestors, which all stages involved in are handcrafted, is often considered as backwards when compared to current manufactories with state-of-the-art automation machinery system. Another reason that is worth considering is the correlation in standpoints. It does not seem unreasonable to suggest that there is hardly any similarily in the way people of different generations make judgments due to the diversity in personal background and era

Nevertheless, there seems to be evidence that history can be an inestimable reservoir of knowledge for understanding human's life. The first and foremost advantageous impact of history is that people can learn various lessons from past mistakes. By observing and analysing the daily activities of our predecessors, modern dwellers can avoid reiterating the same blunders. This is shown by national leaders are equipped with in-depth historical knowledge, especially in decision-making and problem-solving, so that they can be a better governor compared to their precursors. Furthermore, history is the decisive key to maintain harmony between distinct segments of society. It goes without saying that a nation without a history is just a collection of people living in the same territory and, consequently, irreconcilable conflicts are inevitable

In conclusion, one could claim that no valuable information can be accomplished from history since there is a significant difference between standpoints and technology. Nevertheless, history is the key to the harmony between different group of people and modern citizens can learn various lessons from past mistakes

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Average: 8.9 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...eservoir of knowledge for understanding humans life. The first and foremost advantageo...
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Line 7, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...learn various lessons from past mistakes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, by the way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6773255814 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38628603924 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563953488372 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.941026887 49.4020404114 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.545454545 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2727272727 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22954774147 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803667636992 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692621240063 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145084845529 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02321062178 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.26 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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