Some people belive that comanies should manufacture products that last for a long time. Other feel that the emphasis shoul be laced on producing goods that are cheap.
Discus both views and give your own opinion
Several people think that industry of manufacture is better to produce some product that last for a long time, but others think that a company better emphasis to placed on producing goods that are not expensive.
On the one hand, there are some people think that if a Industry of manufacture produce several product which durable will be better. This is will be favorable to producer and costumer. Companies will be more economies. Make goods with many counts can save production cost, more likely to distribute to many regions or places without worry that the quality of products will decrease. Beside that, customer also feel favorable for the goods which they are accept/receive has good quality and more safety.
on the other hand, they are guess that if a company produce goods better with cheap price/ affordable. The low cost will accelerate selling product, for instance consumer more interest and sell quickly. We are know that, consumer behavior feel glad when look some product has cheap price. That is a big opportunity for producer so that the product could sold out quickly
Over all, both of the think are true and same has positive impact both thinking, but I guess that is very important to buy a cheap product but we have to look the quality. buy product with low cost however the quality is not a guarantee is a bad choice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hers think that a comany better emphasis to placed on producing goods that are no...
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Line 2, column 54, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nd, there are some people think that if a Industry of manufacture produce several...
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Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun product seems to be countable; consider using: 'several products'.
Suggestion: several products
...at if a Industry of manufacture produce several product which durable will be better. This is w...
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...ribute to many regions or places without frigh/ worry that the quality of produc...
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Line 2, column 347, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... regions or places without frigh/ worry that the quality of products will dicrea...
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Line 2, column 464, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'accepted'.
Suggestion: accepted
... favorable for the goods which they are accept/receive has good quality and more savet...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...eive has good quality and more savety. on the other hand, they are guess that if ...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
... more interest dan sell quickly. We are know that, konsumer behaviour feel glad when...
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Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'sell'
Suggestion: sell
... for produsen so that the product could sold out fastly. Over all, both of the thi...
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Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ld sold out fastly. Over all, both of the think are true and same has positif impact b...
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Line 4, column 65, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ink are true and same has positif impact both thinking, but I guess that is very ...
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Line 4, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the quality. Bougt product with low cost however the quality is not a guarantee i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, for instance, i guess, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81974248927 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41354403126 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545064377682 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9852061448 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5833333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300305272739 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105908096626 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840297539442 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19570784951 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939412977636 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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